I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Monday, 1 July 2013

Diamond In The Sky

The sun goes down, the moon was up, and there was only one star awake that looked similar to a diamond. There was one thing about that diamond, it was so bright and huge that it was nearly the size of the moon. This star was taking over the moon and everyone was outside looking at it, just imagine if you were the star, everyone would be staring at you, just you! No one knew what it was, that's the only reason why people call it a diamond, but one day a guy named Neil Armstrong travelled to the moon and about two meters far from the moon he saw the diamond, and just realised it was just a normal star. That's when everybody went back inside and starting moaning about that star. That star was still special because in the whole world everyone saw it. They didn't forget that moment of one star up above that looked like a diamond but realised it was a normal exquisite star.

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